3 Reasons Why Head-Hopping is Evil

Ah, head-hopping. The bane of any beginner’s existence. Head-hopping happens when you are writing third person (“he said/she said”) limited (not omniscient – e.g. any time you are not narrating the story the story!) … and you’re writing along in one character’s point of view (POV) … and suddenly you’re able to see the thoughts…